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May 17, 2005 14:25:51 GMT -5
Post by Audie Smith on May 17, 2005 14:25:51 GMT -5
Post Any Reviews You Have For Noble Blood Here!
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May 29, 2005 19:31:26 GMT -5
Post by Jacquie on May 29, 2005 19:31:26 GMT -5
Chapter 1's Review:
Okay that was the best start to a story I've read so far. I loved how you portrayed her sense of fear indirectly, very well written. Yes, you should continue and keep going until the story is finished. I love it. Period. Great job, keep up the good work!
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May 29, 2005 19:45:28 GMT -5
Post by Jacquie on May 29, 2005 19:45:28 GMT -5
Chapter 2 Review:
I liked this one, as much as the first, maybe more. I think my favorite part in this was how you described the deer hunting. That was well written. I also liked your description of Hiei - though it could use some gramatical editing (no offense meant). All in all, a job well done on this chapter!
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May 29, 2005 19:51:52 GMT -5
Post by Jacquie on May 29, 2005 19:51:52 GMT -5
Review for Chapter 3:
Well I though this chapter turned out great! I loved your introduction at the beginning of it, how you described 'the hunters and the hunted' have you ever considered journalism? I'm sure you'd be great at it! I think my favorite part of the chapter was when 'she' was thinking back to her parents and her mother's knitted rose or crocheted or whatever it was. Awesome job on this chapter!
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May 29, 2005 20:01:11 GMT -5
Post by Jacquie on May 29, 2005 20:01:11 GMT -5
Review for chapter 4: I think that my favorite part of this chapter was the very end where 'she' asked Kurama what he and Hiei were talking about. I like how you put in language barriers, this isn't often done and so it adds suspense and intrigue to the story. Well done! I also think that you kept Hiei and Kurama in character perfectly, some thing not many can do!
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May 29, 2005 20:09:32 GMT -5
Post by Jacquie on May 29, 2005 20:09:32 GMT -5
Review for Chapter 5:
Haunted by the memories of the dead. Awesome ending, suspensful and yet well written. You know the more I read this story, the more I fall in love with it (metaphorically speaking of course). It's well written, you don't automatically jump into the romance, the vocabulary is well used, the characters are in character and the reader has one of the most unique personalities I've ever encountered. Good job, continue please, I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
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Aug 24, 2005 17:49:10 GMT -5
Post by Jacquie on Aug 24, 2005 17:49:10 GMT -5
Review for Chapter 6:
One word: WOW. That was an awesome chapter! I think I especially liked how you ended it. 'Scared? I would be if I were you' or something like that...excellent chapter. I really liked this one! I think my favorite part was when Koenma was explaining it all. Well, I don't know why, but I've run out of things I can say. Good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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