Cuzzy
New Writer
Posts: 9
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May 23, 2005 15:02:17 GMT -5
Post by Cuzzy on May 23, 2005 15:02:17 GMT -5
Please review to my oneshot!!!!!! <3333 ^^
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May 29, 2005 20:14:43 GMT -5
Post by Jacquie on May 29, 2005 20:14:43 GMT -5
Okay, one of the best Kurama/You one-shots I've read so far. I liked how you didn't over-dramatise everything nor did you put a big emphasis on the romance. Good job! I especially liked though, the way you ended it. You never did tell the reader(s) if Kurama came back or not. The way you did was most excellent, had it been written any other way it would have seemed that you cut off the story, what with everyone being worried about 'her' and all. I'm still wondering, did Kurama die or didn't he. Very suspensful, very well written, and a superb plot. I loved this one-shot, hopefully I'll be able to write this well someday.
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KarenaWilliams
Junior Writer
Hiei is just so cute and aloof that I could glomp him!!
Posts: 38
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Jul 29, 2005 16:44:15 GMT -5
Post by KarenaWilliams on Jul 29, 2005 16:44:15 GMT -5
OOOOOOO I loved it! LOL! ^^ Anyways, it written in a really good form and I loved your writing style...I think I just repeated myself...anyways, I also loved that it was slightly saddening because you can't always have happy fics. At least, that's what I tell myself. Anyways, good job and I hope to see more fics in the future! ^__~
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